literature

doyouremember?

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do you remember</i> when you told me that you wished you could take a magic eraser and take all my scars away?
"because you're too good for that. i don't like seeing you hurt." you said as we sat together on your bed in the dark.
i rolled my eyes at you, because you had no idea how badly i wished that was true.

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do you remember</i> when we sat in your backyard, staring up at the stars. and you told me about the dream you had last night?
"we were on the beach at night, building sandcastles."
i laughed at you, then. i couldn't picture you on a beach. no, not you with your liberty spikes and studded jackets.

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do you remember</i> when you came over when i was baby-sitting?
my cousins simply adored you. even when you told them you wouldn't play barbie's with them.
"girls shouldn't aspire to something like that. she's synthetic, fake. nobody can be like that."
the girls just stared at you with wide-eyes.
and i smiled because i knew how serious you were.

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do you remember</i> the time we walked through the rain?
"i love the rain." i told you, smiling ear to ear. you scowled and shook out your soaking wet hair.
"i hate rain." you grumbled but took my hand in yours.
i couldn't stop giggling at how cute you looked.

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and do you remember</i> the concert we went to?
my favorite band. the one you couldn't stand. but you took me anyway.
"we never spend much time together anymore." you told me on the way.
it was my favorite concert, only because i was there with you.

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and i'm still wondering if you remember.
because i never, ever want to forget.

<3
i thought i'd try something a bit different.
tell me what you think?

there are small aspects of this that are true.
but, mostly, it's not.


i love you, boy.
and now those words don't mean anything to you.

i miss you and your liberty spikes and tight pants and studded jackets.
)=
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passing-cars's avatar
this is awesome.
i seriously love this.